Tuesday, December 24, 2013

Day 358 - Anticipation Story

Anticipation Story
Matthew Ryan Fischer

The music was pounding; the heavy bass could be felt pulsing in their muscles. Their lights were low, having been replaced with dark colored bulbs and black lights. The garage had been built with a guest room on the second floor. The room was full of smoke and teenage kids. A strobe light was set to a slow flicker. The smoke and the lights created a broken feel; the night was seen in shattered moments, not a full or consistent stream of events. It was free flow stream of consciousness. People appeared and disappeared. Movement was stilted and short. People were posed in moments like art, and lost in meaning.
Katie’s parents were away. No one cared where. That wasn’t the point. That wasn’t what mattered. What mattered was that the stage was set for them to have their moment. It was a moment of freedom, a moment of release. It was made to just be a moment to live in and experience the immediacy without it having to be a moment that would matter later.
Katie danced slowly. She twisted and turned and moved to her own rhythm. She moved to the music, but she was making something totally that was her own. Everyone else was fast and eager and a little bit dirty. Katie just moved and looked like she was the music come alive.
Vick sat back on the couch and watched the dance floor. He opened one eye and closed the other. Then he opened the closed eye and shut the other one. Back and forth, back and forth. Right and then left. Left and then right. He was mindlessly cutting the room in half. He was feeling something of his own. He wasn’t paying attention to the music. He wasn’t paying attention to the beat or the drumming bass. He was just feeling his own flow. Half the room, then the other half. Half the people, then the other half. The strobe kept flashing and everything was stutter-stepped motion. It was broken and disjointed.
A pattern rose. The strobe flashes, the dancing in repetitive synchronicity with the repetitive music beat, and his left eye, right eye change in view. Everyone was in step. Everyone was doing the same, feeling the same, creating the same. Everyone was the same. Except for Katie. She was her own. She was different. She was on her own wavelength. And Vick finally saw.
Vick had looked at Katie before, but he hadn’t really been watching her. He had seen her at parties. Everybody had seen her before. She was well known for doing her thing. She was a dancer that knew dancers and they all seemed to run together and live by their own rules. But Vick had never seen her like this before. She seemed so free. She seemed to have escaped the banality that was their shared existence. She was living in her own little world and he was just looking in from the outside, one broken viewpoint at a time.
He wanted to stand up and cross the room and be with her, but he didn’t want to ruin it. She was a perfect picture right now. To include him would only spoil the perfection. To attempt to reach her would only make him realize she was untouchable. To try would simply ruin it. She was in a different place, on another plane, and he was just an outside observer. He needed her. She didn’t need him. She was whole. His legs realized something that his mind hadn’t quite figured out yet. And so he sat and watched. It was almost nothing, but it was slightly enough and all that he deserved to be a part of. He was better just for getting to watch her perfection. He was spirited away and got a chance to be part of something pure and energetic and beautiful.
Katie simply danced. She had no idea what Vick was seeing or thought he was watching. She just danced and didn’t worry about a single other thing.

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